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shattered_fics ([personal profile] shattered_fics) wrote2008-03-20 10:46 pm

The Garden Room

Title: The Garden Room
Rating: Light R
Pairing/Character(s): Jack/Ianto
Summary: The opening to 'the scene'
Warnings: minor spoilers for 2.11 'Adrift'
Length: Short
Word Count: 468
Chapter #: (1/1)
WIP or Complete: Complete
Author's Note: Okay this is my first Jack/Ianto story. If you can call it a story that is. It's just really an opening to that scene from 'Adrift' I haven't watched the episode, save for that scene, so it's not really all that spoilery. But still, this is Un-BETAed and I don't have word so it's not spell checked.



Jack slowly followed Ianto into the plant room. After spending the day staring at him, he wanted to do this. He didn't care that it was the middle of the day and that anyone could walk in. He was always one for voyeurism but knew it wasn't Ianto's favorite thing. They tried it once, but Ianto got what Jack called as stage fright. He chuckled to himself as he startled Ianto who quickly turned around. He smirked at the younger man as he slowly walked toward him. This wasn't was Ianto was thinking when he walked into the garden room. They after all did have naked-hide-and-seek a little over an hour ago, he was surprised that after Jack had found him for the fourth him he was still able to walk without holding onto anything for support. But none the less he was ready for what ever Jack had in store for him. Though Ianto had a plan of his own as well, it was all about Ianto during Hide-&-Seek, Ianto wanted to make this romp all about Jack.

Ianto walked slowly up to Jack who was grinning his famous grin. Licking his lips Ianto kissed Jack feverously knocking over a plant in the process as they battled for control. As they battled for the kiss they worked on each other shirts. Jack gained control for a minute as he pushed Ianto with his kiss, his tongue battling in his mouth as he threw the younger mans shirt to the ground. Ianto bit Jack's bottom lip as he regained his control stripping Jack of his shirt for the fifth time that day. He smiled against Jacks lips as he ran his hand up and down his back, scratching his back in the process, causing Jack to moan against the kiss. Ianto knew at that moment he was in control this time. Slowly his hands traveled down Jacks chest scraping at his nipples Jack arched into his touch. Ianto fumbled with his belt, his hands were shaking lightly as they quickly dived into his boxers finding exactly what he wanted.

He gripped Jack's cock lightly as Jack gasped into the kiss that Ianto was making more heated. Jack was trying to unwork Ianto's belt but he kept moving his hips out of the Captains reach, wanting it to be about him. He had already had his pleasure, more than he could count today, and thought Jack deserved something. Jack's breathing was becomming more labored, he didn't know how much longer he could last. His changed positions as Ianto kissed him deeper and stroked him harder. They didn't even ear the door open---

"Jack I--WOAH!" Gwen said blushing before stuttering sorry and leaving the room. Jack looked unfazed as Ianto scrambled to find his shirt to follow her out and explain.

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 04:06 am (UTC)(link)
Oh great episode tag!

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 04:16 am (UTC)(link)
I'm not sure if that's a good or bad thing lol

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
It's a good thing! Perfect missing scene from the episode!

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yay woohoo! lol I thought that's what you mean, but lack of sleep on my part.


Thank You :D

[identity profile] shara50.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Good job!!

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 12:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank You

[identity profile] nightporters.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Loved the story. Did you mean 'hear' the door open? You can always send me stuff to beta. It's a pain not having word. avon09@googlemail.com

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 12:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank You :D

Yeah I did I caught a lot of mistakes when I read it after I posted but just didn't feel like changing.


Cool! Thank you I'll keep you in mind :D

[identity profile] thalassa-ipx.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Really good.
I need to make a amanipulation about this hide and seek thing...

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 04:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank You :D


Oh man that would be awesome!

[identity profile] credulesque.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh this was just...words escape me...

*thud*

I wish we could have seen this bit ;)

=)

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY! It's been a while since someone's thudded from my work :D


You and me both lol

[identity profile] thrashgrrrl.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 09:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I wonder if this bit is on the deleted scenes section on the series 2 dvd?!

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh god I hope so.

[identity profile] tresa-cho.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Brilliant missing scene. Needs more of this in the show.

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-21 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks :D Oh yeah I agree.

[identity profile] igrayne.livejournal.com 2008-03-23 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
See? I read :)

Well, if I didn't already hate Gwen, I do now. Always has to ruin things doesn't she? :p

Great little deleted scene :) I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!

x

[identity profile] domluver.livejournal.com 2008-03-23 02:58 am (UTC)(link)
WOOHOO!


ahaha man I wasn't even thinking of my Gwen hate when I did that. Man I could've been do bias! lol

Gracias :D Woohoo! I'm going to try to post more. Maybe post first part of my Ianto piece soon :D